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Never played KH, so I couldn't tell... The voicing was pretty good, and I could see your effort in it, but maybe you should put in more of your natural voice 'cause that high-tone voice seemed pretty forced to me (no offense, but I say that because it never changes tone or adjusts to the emotion needed for the entire minute, and 'cause you had to stop alot mid-sentence ) Now that Paige's practicing to raise their age levels to a more mature range, I'd say you should start practicing on using your natural voice so you can easily adjust to the emotions required (from what I know about Crash from my time playing, he's a pretty wacky and bipolar guy like Kefka, and Paige adjusted him to show more of his sensitive side so that means you have to have a constantly shifting voice pitch that can show his funny, energetic and dramatic, melancholic sides)

BTW a neat trick I learned from watching an animated movie's Behind-the-scenes, since no one's really gonna watch you WHILE doing the voice (unless you send a video of you VA-ing, which would be very awkward ), you should add some facial expressions and hand-body movements while doing the voice to get more into the scene and get the feel, as though you ARE Crash Bandicoot, and try saving archives of one line done in different ways for comparison

Hope it helps, though I'm really knowledgeable in this area anymore But I still have taste for all art (eg. when I watch a movie, I judge every art from graphics to voice acting to music to theme to pacing and transition to the acting itself) which I'll use to help you

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